Illegible signs & the reality effect
In “The Reality Effect,” Barthes investigates the purpose of what we might today call “filler description” in literary fiction. By calling on passing details in a short story by Flaubert, he remarks that while these details may have some functional relevance with regard to a fiction’s characters or atmosphere, they’ve been overlooked in literary criticism because they don’t directly pertain to narrative structure. He goes on to explain that “insignificant notation” is detached from what we think of as narrative because it lacks a “predictive” quality. That means it isn’t temporal, or related to a chain of cause-and-effect that gives substance to a plot; it isn’t “significant” to this sort of contextual ordering that produces the legible “meaning” that de Saussure talked about with regard to language. Barthes then makes a brief foray into the aesthetic role of description and gives Flaubert some credit where it’s due: in his novel Madame Bovary, Flaubert “paints” his setting of the real-life town of Rouen not to capture it in its most empirically accurate state but to use it as a vessel for “the jewels of a rare number of metaphors,” and painstakingly revised his descriptions of the place simply to avoid the phonic repetitions he detested (144). He goes on to argue that–even while carefully crafted by the hand of an artist–Flaubert’s descriptions still lack meaning within the mechanism of narrative, and therefore fill a separate purpose even while being arbitrary. That’s all to say that these details are signs shed of what they would otherwise signify: they create the illusion of referencing something, but they surely don’t reference anything to do with plot. Standing “alone,” they have the effect of seeming “real,” just like rain hammering against your window on a Tuesday evening has no structural or symbolic meaning in your real life, it just “is.” Barthes makes the great point that harnessing mundane, random, but ultimately recognizable details is an important gesture in literary realism and part of a necessary breakthrough into that genre.
While Johnson doesn’t discuss Melville in terms of realism, I think “Melville’s Fist” makes for an interesting extension of what happens in fiction when the relationship between sign and the signified is complicated. As we discussed in class, the narrative structure of Billy Budd in fact hinges on the binary qualities of its characters being crisscrossed, the “tension between two incompatible possibilities,” the “polarizing gap between what was said and what was meant,” and that in the end maybe the late Melville was trying to draw our attention to the scrambled delineations of “difference between.” What Johnson seems to be getting at are the moral implications of reading, or judging, based on a simplified relationship between the sign and the signified (even if reversed in the Claggartian “ironic” way). Is that “insignificant notation” Barthes referred to–in which the sign is detached, points to nowhere, ultimately escaping judgment–another way of wielding ambiguity in fiction? Does Melville’s purgatorial use of ambiguity through Captain Vere, before the execution is finalized, create the “reality effect” in a story that would otherwise be allegorical and therefore plainly predictive? I don’t think they can be associated so simply, but reading Johnson has helped me rethink what the greater purpose of the “reality effect” might be. I’ve recently become very interested in what exactly makes a work of art (man-made, constructed, artificial by nature) feel “real,” I think especially in the context of virtual realities, the “deepfake,” the drive for immersion and roundabout ways of simulating whatever we want to think of now as “real life.” What is accomplished by getting at the “real” via the fictional or “fake”?
P.S. Sorry for the late-night post! Have been suffering at the hand of nyc housing applications, which I’ll say involves some concrete examples of the tension between two incompatible possibilities. (:


