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An architectural genius: Where descriptions fail, buildings speak~ Nietzsche

Posted by Raveena Nabi (she/her) on

I feel that human is an “architectural genius” because of the ability possessed by all humans to make meaning out of “nothing”. We derive the most complex stories and associations from mundane objects and actions. When we tell stories our words as Eliza Hamilton from the musical Hamilton puts it “You built me palaces out of paragraphs/You built cathedrals” (Song: Burn). We make entire worlds with some resembling ours and others being illusions we breathe life into. Words are just scratches on paper or squiggles on a screen that require the reader to imagine the concepts the words intend to represent. According to Nietzsche, the human is an “architectural genius” because it “succeeds in erecting the infinitely complicated cathedral of concepts on moving foundations…so delicate that it can be carried off on the waves…” (pg. 757). I think what he means by this is that what we conceive of as truth and it resting on solid ground is that the ground is moving constantly with the truth being built to be strong enough to hold on. The moving ground could be an illusion to the questioning that society often subjects the truth to. Even when the questions appear settled, unanswered questions bubble under the surface threatening to move the foundation further. When he describes how the concepts rest on the foundation of the relationship he draws between being firm and being delicate is probably about how for a truth it needs to be able to move in a way where it reaches everyone yet be sturdy enough to withstand questioning or even opposing truths.

This implies that language has more of a capacity to build new things and less of a capacity to describe. This is not to say that language is incapable of describing. Many of the poems and stories written in the romance genre can pair tangible words with a concept as messy and tangled as love. However when asked to describe love by itself most humans struggle. That highlights the limits of descriptive language exists because “It is not known to us in itself but only in its effects” (pg. 759). As with love we only know the concept from how it affects others and how we are affected as recipients of love however we do not know what the essence of love is. Nietzsche further expands on this when he mentions how “…they are utterly incomprehensible to us in their essential nature” (pg. 759). It is because of this that humanity relies heavily on figurative language to explore or explain the truth within ideas and objects encountered in daily life. On some level we are aware that we will never know the full truth within the world around us yet these language tools help us to get as close to the essential truth as possible.

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Blogging 101

Posted by Jeff Allred (he/him/his) on

A central feature of this course will be the writing we do on this site.  In what follows, I will outline three things:

  • a rationale for why I ask you to blog in the first place, rather than write traditional essays
  • a quick primer on how to create your first post
  • a simple rubric to guide your writing + an example of a good-looking post

First things first: why blog?

  1. Blogging is sharable: rather than have a private circuit between you and me, we have a much more dynamic conversation across the entire class.  
  2. Blogging is public, sort of: I like the idea that we are responsible for our ideas in front of broader audiences.  In practical terms, I doubt anyone is listening in most of the time, but I think it’s important that we roll up our sleeves and defend our arguments in an open and public forum as often as possible.  And of course, you can show your family/friends/pets what we’ve been up to in class.  For those who have reservations about privacy, note that a) you are free to create your own Commons name/avatar as you please, so you can use a pseudonym if you like; and b) you are free to delete your posts at the end of class.  If anyone has serious reservations despite all this, feel free to contact me.
  3. Blogging is sturdy: rather than forget the piece of paper once it’s been handed back, we can link back to prior statements or observations, or to each others’. If you like, you can leave your posts up for future 306ers to see.
  4. Blogging is responsive: rather than only getting comments from me, you’ll comment on and get comments on each other’s work.

What makes for an excellent post?  For this class, posts should:

  • contain at least 400 words (use word count in WordPress or your word processor)
  • explain a given text’s argument (or part of an argument), using quotations and paraphrases of the text with page numbers in parentheses
  • engage that argument critically, noting its limitations, its links to other texts we’ve read, its unstated assumptions, etc.

Here’s a simple rubric, adapted from Mark Sample, that gives some sense of what I’m looking for. Since we’re using contract grading, anything in the A-B range below is “satisfactory” for contract purposes.

Rating Characteristics
A Exceptional. The post is focused and coherently integrates examples with explanations or analysis. It moves beyond summary of the argument to engage the argument critically, articulating weak points or dubious assumptions.  It makes useful connections to other thinkers and/or applies theoretical arguments to practical situations.
B Satisfactory. The post is reasonably focused, and explanations or analysis are mostly based on examples or other evidence. It provides a compelling summary of an argument but fails to engage the argument more than glancingly. The entry reflects moderate engagement with the topic.
C Underdeveloped. The post is restricted to summary,  without consideration of alternative perspectives, and may contain misreadings of the argument at one or more points. The entry reflects passing engagement with the topic and/or fails to hit the minimum word count.
D Limited. The journal entry is unfocused, or simply rehashes others’ comments; it fails to engage the argument seriously. It may be well under the minimum word count.
0 No Credit. The journal entry is missing or consists of one or two disconnected sentences.

What do I write about? You are free to choose any focus you wish and to write about any of the texts we’re reading in any combination. A couple of suggestions:

  • You may write about what we’re about to discuss our what we’ve just discussed. I prefer that you not write about something we’ve discussed long ago. So, for Friday, you may write about Nietzsche or about de Saussure. By the time Blog Post #2 rolls around, I don’t want to hear about Nietzsche, since we’ll have moved on.
  • Be careful how much you bite off. It’s better to “do more with less” than the opposite here. So a close examination of de Saussure is probably a better idea than a breezy, loose comparison of Nietzsche, de Saussure, and Culler, in which each gets a sentence or two.
  • The perfect is the enemy of the good. Getting zeroes in the gradebook for the posts is deadly. Better to dash of something that’s not your best work than to leave it blank. And it’s good discipline: no one feels like they “got it” after reading Lacan for the first time, so writing your way towards clarity, no matter how messily, is valuable.
  • Use the study questions: it’s perfectly permissible–even suggested–to simply answer one of the study questions in your blog post, or to use it as a springboard for a more complex argument. They’re there, so use them!

Last but not least, here’s an example of a good-looking post.  I’ve annotated it using the hypothes.is tool, so you can see what makes it exemplary.  And remember: it’s not an exercise in cookie-cutting: your results may vary, and there are lots of ways to write an excellent post.

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